Who Are You ?

I was walking Roxana ( my dog ) and I saw a person with no face . I went up to this mysterious things it looked still . Roxana went up to it and barked her head of. I went pale when Roxana peed on the no faced person . It wore a black long still cloke . Then I leant on a tree trunk . All of a sudden I fell l ! I could not stop …

I had had been falling for five hours then thump ! I hit the floor then fainted . I woke in a weird world with trolls staring at me in such a shock in their hairy faces .


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Who Are You ? — 1 Comment

  1. Hi Sophie,
    loved your post and laughed at ‘I went pale when Roxana peed on the no faced person.’ next time try to use a colon. A brill post I enjoyed reading it.

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