What came down the drainpipe?

There was a loud noise coming from the drainpipe… Ella came down from here bed room . It was 3 am. Suddenly, it came down the drainpipe as just a rat A RAT.Really you made get out of bed at 3am for a rat. What a silly story! ” Okay chill  lets get back to the story.” Right lets get back to the story . The rat started to crawl up Ella’s leg and it bit her right to the bone and she yelped in pain . She ran inside to her mum ( who was sleeping in her bed ) and then Ella fell to te floor….


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What came down the drainpipe? — 1 Comment

  1. Hi Ellie,
    Great story loved how you used brackets. Remember to check it because you wrote te for the. Otherwise a great story can’t wait to read more of your 100 word challenge.

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