The special occasion

One evening, a yellow gorilla sprinted past a hot dog stand what smelt delicious! The gorilla smashed into the chequered bricks and made a huge explotion. Everybody screamed and ran as fast as they could, but the gorilla chased after them. When it climbed the pretty buildings he sprung from one another! I was Running away from the beast and I was frightened. So I went home and told my mum and mum called the police and I felt safe when she had done that.The police came to my house and told me where it was… it was on my roof!


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The special occasion — 1 Comment

  1. Hi Reggie,

    Great story! Your story was very well structured- it had a clear beginning, middle and end- I especially liked the twist a the end. Just be careful of the spelling of “explosion”. Keep up the good work.

    Michael (Team 100wc),

    P.S. I really liked the recording you uploaded with the story. Your voice was very clear. I wish other students would do this as well.

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