The space story.

I was on my way with Bella to the International Space Station.  Suddenly, Bella fell over with a hamburger.  As fast as lightening she tripped over, and the hamburger fell onto a bright, glowing, red button.  On it read BLAST.  The ship began to soar through space.  Bella and I flew through it for years just to find a safe planet to land on.  I turned the space ship to east and went that way since east is lucky.  We found nothing.  Suddenly, in the corner of my eye, there was a small rocky planet.  “There, a rock planet!” I screamed at the top of my lungs.  “How do we turn off the blast?”.  I pressed the button ‘OFF’ and that surely answered her question.  We slowly landed on a flat surface.  There was silence, no noise at all.  We decided to walk to explore this strange place.  I wonder…


The space story. — 1 Comment

  1. Hi Ruby! Thank you for posting. Your story managed to show that space is vast and empty. I wonder how many years they were travelling in space. What was the planet like? I enjoyed the tension at the end. What will happen to them? Next time, to make it even better, remember to use slightly longer sentences as it will help with how your story flows.

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