The Robotic Knight

The girl sat down beside the  robotic knight , staring into his eyes and into the fog that was in front of them  . The fog was a thick smokey grey colour which almost looked like a dappled grey colour in the dark night. Suddenly , the robot slipped into the lake infront of them ! Luckily , he was not harmed .The little girl , who was delighted he was safe , ran over to help him out .


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The Robotic Knight — 10 Comments

  1. Hi Tilly,
    The discription was very good but make sure you put in more commas in between the adjectives – ‘thick smockey grey’ = ‘thick, smockey, grey’.

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