The Dog In Space!

It was a normal day in Westwood. Dude, our dog was sat by the gate watching everyone walking by. He didn’t just watch, he barked very loudly! “What a noisy dog,”one lady said.                        “I wish he wasn’t so loud!”said our neighbour. I was really annoyed of Dude barking because he literally is barking all day. Sometimes he wakes my neighbours up in the morning and they get very cross.(They have only just moved in.)

Suddenly, there was a knock at the door, I picked up the keys while I heard Dude barking and I slowly opened the door and there was a very tall man. He said his name was Peter and that he worked for NASA.”I’ve heard your dog barking and I’ve never heard a dog so loud!”Am I aloud to take your dog onto the moon and see if we can hear him bark from here.”Yes.”I said.

Finally, we were at the space station and we were about to get the dog onto the rocket. My favourite bit was that Dude had to wear a space suit, he looked hilarious. Dude was so excited that his tail was wagging. I was very excited for him because he had never ever been to space.(No dog has never been to space anyway.) He could be the loudest dog on Earth! 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 blast off!

After a very long bumpy ride Dude had landed on the rocky moon, he was very excited and immediately he started barking! Guess what? We could hear him from our house! Dude is the loudest dog in the whole world!!!!!!




The Dog In Space! — 1 Comment

  1. Hi Charlie! You rounded up your story nicely at the end. Well done. Your story was interesting because you used lots of description and it was paced well. How exciting to have a dog in space! I hope he managed to come get back safely. You used a range of punctuation and you included some accurate speech. To make your writing even better, next time check that you have closed your inverted commas. 🙂 🙂

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