The Broccoli Tree

Excitedly, Lottie ran as fast as she could into her amazing garden so she could go and play on her sturdy swing.  She loved playing on it because it felt like she was flying. As she was playing on her swing, which her Granddad made for her, she just noticed out of the corner of her eye that the tree the swing was on, wasn’t a tree, it was broccoli. “SNAP!”went the tree branch. Sadly, the bright green broccoli tree broke. Suddenly, Lottie heard her mum shout her name for dinner but Lottie was very upset about the tree breaking.


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The Broccoli Tree — 3 Comments

  1. This story had a sad ending but the start of the story was good. An amazing middle to the story and a good twist. I think it was fantastic.

  2. Hi Charlie,
    Really good opener and I liked how the story carried on. Good use of capital letters to make ‘snap’ standout. Next time try not to use ‘she’ so often.

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