Oh No Not Again!!!!

Tick tick, the clock tapped away time, Gary’s eyes fluttered open, “Thirsty!” Gary crawled clumsily out of bed and tip toed down the darkened stairs. Frozen on the bottom step, the whites of his eyes shone in the moonlight and his jaw fell suddenly to the floor, “Oh no, not again!”


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Oh No Not Again!!!! — 1 Comment

  1. I am dying to know what happens next. What does he see? Great use of alliteration, adverbs and adjectives. Well done William, keep it up.

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