Me and my sisters fight

I was so cross that I wanted to run away . When me and my sister had our fight we hit punched each other,palled each other hair . It was the worst fight we had ever had. We both got grounded from our mum ,we got so angry at each other . Our parents had to pall us a part.We didn’t talk for a week . That were the most boring thing ever . I tried to say sorry but she just put her head phones in and blasted her music . Finally after a the week that we didn’t speak to each other we finally spoke , we never did it again .


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Me and my sisters fight — 1 Comment

  1. Hi Lucy, great story! You used lots of commas and you used a ly opener. Next time, make sure you check you spellings and put spaces after fall stops.
    Well done!

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