Is The Robot Actually Broken ?

Under the sun setting sky, Sofia went for a stroll through the meadow. Suddenly, she saw a broken, dusty, silver, metal robot that sat on the delicate green grass with trees gently swaying above it.                                                                                                                              “That looks old!” exclaimed Sofia. Then the robot silently… shook. Sofia, who was terrified, slowly stepped away from the robot.


Is The Robot Actually Broken ? — 6 Comments

  1. well done Sophie. Your story is very good and you used some great description. Next time try to use some more punctuation.

  2. Hi Sophie, great story you used a range of punctuation. Next time make you sentences longer. You described it very well. Well done.

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