I feel Like Superman!!!!

As I was falling through the air, I felt like superman swooping past the city’s but unfortunately I was just falling out of the sky. I could feel the air hitting me every second I moved, my eyes were starting to water but that wasn’t really on my mind, I was getting the feeling that something would go wrong. My heart was in my mouth, I was starting to  worry, the sun was blinding me, I was getting the feeling I was doomed… As I reached for my parachutes ripcord, my worst fears came true…

I FORGOT TO PUT MY PARACHUTE ON!!!!


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I feel Like Superman!!!! — 1 Comment

  1. You used lots of senses and really exploded the moment so your writing conjures up a vivid image. You used a variety of punctuation and you built up the tension for your last, killing sentence which delivered a punchy twist. Well done!

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