HOT TUB

Saturday night I went into my hot tub and it bubbled and glowed like a disco ball.I flipped my head out of the tub and looked up at the pretty stars in the  dark sky.

by Ruby

 


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HOT TUB — 1 Comment

  1. Your use of bubbled and glowed was very atmospheric. Well done for your use of adjectives and for checking for some of your punctuation. A good job!

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