Hate spiders

One morning, I was eating my breakfast and drinking some orange juice. I was just about to jump up and get some more orange juice, when I spotted a very large strange spider crawling across the floor. “ Agraahhhh!”. Surely the spider couldn’t have been from England! My mum noticed it and ran to get one of her big gardening buckets and then she covered the spider with it, not letting it escape, then she slided card underneath and then chucked the bucket with the spider inside, straight out the window! When it landed, it dug straight into the green grass!


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Hate spiders — 3 Comments

  1. Well done Anna I really liked your work because it made me want to read more and more. Next time, to improve your work maybe put in a bit more about the tea pot.

  2. Hi Anna,
    I like the idea behind your story and it had a nice structure. I honestly didn’t see how you were going to link it to the picture until the very end which was really clever and I loved that. Keep up the good work!
    Team 100 ~ Warwick, England

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