Jack was running as fast as he could he was running from his brother because he had done something to annoy him.Suddenly he slipped down a hole.THUD.His bum slammed on the .Still bit shaken by what had just happened he stumbled forward. To stable himself he leaned on something white. Feeling more stable he stood on his feet to see he was leaning on a huge When he properly opened his eyes he heard some voices coming from the cup.
” AHHHH.”He was terrified what is happening to me its like I can…Can talk to cups.Then the cup said you are a cup yourself.WHAT!
“AHHHHH.”
Hello Douglas,
What a strange adventure Jack had. It seemed a little like the experiences Alice had when she found herself in Wonderland. Perhaps your story is the beginning of a sequel adventure where Jack has stumbled into the strange world of Alice.
I wonder where your story might lead if it were to continue?
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia