Dream horse

As I watched woody  munching away at the hay I had just given her I suddenly remembered that her beautiful white coat was not brushed or washed or even spayed for a shiny coat on her. There was a competition tommorow! I would wash her when I had rode her for a little while. Before I went riding, I went to go and dry my hair more because I had just been swimming and celebrated someones birthday.  I got on my horse called Toffe and went for a  ride with Toffe. On bomfire night the huge flame looked so cool.


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Dream horse — 7 Comments

  1. Hi Anna, I agree with Mya and Talia. Still it was a amazing story! Next time try to add a bit of suspense into your stories. Carry on writing these stories. It is a joy to read them

  2. Hi Anna,
    Thank you for sharing your writing with us this week, I really enjoyed reading it. You have included some fabulous vocabulary and this created a clear picture of the horse for me, well done. 🙂
    Keep writing and sharing!
    Mrs Tucker (100WC Team)
    Wirral, UK.

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