Cave Men

One dark creepy day in a dark gloomy cave, there lived 5000 cave men.These cave men were good at making flames and they also liked to celebrate just because they wanted to. The things that there not good at is swimming, painting especially the colour white. Tomorrow they are going to celebrate because it is jerry’s birthday. For his birthday they are going out to the fire cave and they are going to make some flames. Bob jerry’s best friend want’s to try and make a flame look just like him. when they had done that they all went back to the cave.


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  1. Hi Matthew
    We have been reading the Funnybones books at school and there was something about your opening sentence that reminded me of the opening of those stories, do you know them?
    I liked the setting of your story, it is certainly original and you have made good use of your setting and story line to fit in those tricky words. I also loved the idea of the cavemen being called Bob and Jerry!
    Miss T team 100wc
    Hampshire, England

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