100wc: it’s behind you

I walked along, content in the peacefulness of the radiant evening. The sun shone bright in the gentle breeze. I watched as the sun set in ecstasy, and its foregone glory drifted away. The moon now took the spotlight, dancing across swaying ground. My mind drifted with child-like dreams. I was oblivious to the fact that a twig snapped. When a fourth snapped I stood up. Every muscle in my body tensed like a piece of elastic. I tried to move, I was paralyzed to the spot, trapped on the order of life and death. Then, the cold hand landed on my shoulder…


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100wc: it’s behind you — 1 Comment

  1. Hi Oscar and Westwood with Iford School. My name is Connor from Ashley School, New Zealand. I really enjoyed your writing because of the great use of vocabulary and the plot you used. After reading it made me wonder where you could have possibly got your inspiration from? Come and look at mine (Number 359) and my schools work. Keep up the great work.

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